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Smile lovers alone wear sunlight - Do you like this Poem?

it may not always be so; and I say
that if your lips,which I have loved, should
touch another's, and your dear strong fingers clutch
his heart, as mine in time not far away;
if on another's face your sweet hair lay
in such a silence as I know, or such
great writhing words as, uttering overmuch,
stand helplessly before the spirit at bay;
if this should be, i say if this should be-
you of my heart, send me a little word;
that I may go unto him, and take his hands,
saying, Accept all happiness from me.
Then shall I turn my face, and hear one bird
sing terribly afar in the lost lands.
unlove's the heavenless hell and homeless home
...lovers alone wear sunlight.
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I like it in general Did you write it? If you did, and you would be open to constructive criticisms let me know, I would make some comments. Or is it just one that you like and have come across?
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I like it in general Did you write it? If you did, and you would be open to constructive criticisms let me know, I would make some comments. Or is it just one that you like and have come across?
Nop! .. I did not write it .. I just came across it somewhere.. I like it and I just decided to share! ..
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Hello ! I really like this poem , Who wrote it ? And where did you find it ? Please do let me know, i really adore Literature Please share some more as well.
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yea its really a good one... i like it too.....thu not the best of lang! but hey the peom is real good.......
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Wow Gloria that's a real cool poem! It is very intense and emotional deep words. I like the context and the rhymes. It would be great if you can share more poems with us.
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Wow Gloria that's a real cool poem! It is very intense and emotional deep words. I like the context and the rhymes. It would be great if you can share more poems with us.
great!.. I'll do just that! ..
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I am not much on poems but as poems go, this one was pretty good. Thanks for sharing it with us!
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this is good poem...to read
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well, it isn't bad and maybe you can start adding more poems.
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